Sunday, 13 October 2013

Class exercise

Basically, we tried doing up a webpage for us to place our drawings.  It was relatively easy, thanks to dreamweaver's newly added function. However there were still problems like alignment etc.

We also tried using "anchor link" for our final project. It was confusing at the start but I sort of got it at the end. Looking forward to final project :)

A3 Critique

I was the last for critique this time round. I personally felt that it was really cheesy. So this time round i will make it into a more dramatic comic! Look forward to it :)

Overall comments:

Cut the last part with the umbrella thingy -> Less cheesy and ambiguity?

End at the pouring down scene -> dramatic, ambiguity?

Confusing -> i will try to simplify

Flow: Okay

Panels lineup: Reasonable