Overall comments:
Cut the last part with the umbrella thingy -> Less cheesy and ambiguity?
End at the pouring down scene -> dramatic, ambiguity?
Confusing -> i will try to simplify
Flow: Okay
Panels lineup: Reasonable
Sunday 13 October 2013
A3 Critique
I was the last for critique this time round. I personally felt that it was really cheesy. So this time round i will make it into a more dramatic comic! Look forward to it :)
Overall comments:
Cut the last part with the umbrella thingy -> Less cheesy and ambiguity?
End at the pouring down scene -> dramatic, ambiguity?
Confusing -> i will try to simplify
Flow: Okay
Panels lineup: Reasonable
Overall comments:
Cut the last part with the umbrella thingy -> Less cheesy and ambiguity?
End at the pouring down scene -> dramatic, ambiguity?
Confusing -> i will try to simplify
Flow: Okay
Panels lineup: Reasonable
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